IELTS | Writing | Task 2 | Essay | Health
Timing: 40 min
Words: 250
Some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. They think all health problems can just be “fixed” by visiting doctors. What problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved?
When people count completely on doctors and neglect personal health management, several problems emerge, which can lead to the more serious form of disease.
One issue with people who believe that doctors should be responsible for their health is that it creates a burden on the healthcare service. This is because people go to the physician more and more instead of thinking about how they can help themselves. This might possibly be solved by patients having to pay for treatment if they have contributed to illness, such as smoking-related diseases. Also, establishing support networks and communities where individuals can share experiences and seek advice can further motivate people to take control of their health. This can include support groups and online forums that promote healthy living and offer social support.
Although many health issues can be managed or prevented through lifestyle choices, people tend to overlook this, which leads them to going to the doctor in inappropriate times when the disease is in serious stages of its development. This neglect of self care can lead to an increase in chronic diseases and health complications. To avoid this people may try mindfulness techniques such as meditations and yoga to find a balance between the mind and the body. Another way to take care of yourself is getting enough rest. It is crucial for mental well-being to keep a healthy work-life balance by taking up new hobbies or walking more.
In conclusion, over-reliance on doctors for health issues can have negative effects on individual wellness. However, through a combination of health education and personal health management these problems can be solved.
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